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Camp Advice

Making Connections

WALT: make connections with our own experience as we read the text.

Playground recount

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On a overcast Thursday morning the whole of room 8 went and sat on the big mat. While we were on it we heard Mr Goodwin yelling at room 7. Room 7 were being soldiers when they left we went and lined up in a boys and girls line. We walked down to the playground quietly. When we got to the playground we didn't know what we were doing.





Challenge




Miss Parrant told us that we have to get into teams. The teams were boys vs girls. After that Miss Parrant told us that we were going to be doing a challenge. The challenge was an obstacle course on the park. The first contester for the boys was John. And the first contester for the girls was Sauma. Miss Parrant said 3,2,1 go. John is in the lead Sauma is just a little bit behind but John got back first so it was the next person’s turn. The challenge was fun.





Free time




When we finished we got free time on the park. Most of the class played tag but me John and Lee went to the junior park but we were just playing around.