Dmic 2

This is my 2nd Dmic question   

The sheep's point of view

This is my dictation writing

Task one

Dmic problem

This is my Dmic 1st task for this week 

Dmic task

This is my 2nd Dmic task for this week and we have to find out how they past the line  

My narrative peephole wirting

One morning someone knocked on Ben’s door Ben was sitting down he got up and was walking up to the door and he looked thru the peephole and there was a famous man there. Ben opened the door and it was just a photo and the man with the photo was Loto and a couple of years ago ben and Loto had a fight and ben didn't like him anymore. But he was just coming to say sorry for everything he done when he finished saying sorry Ben said sorry for everything he done and I forgive you and then Loto said I forgive you to.




This morning I pear edited with Lorenzo and I changed a couple of word's

This is my reading task

week 5 dimc problem

Today me and my dimc group our problem was about sorting bins out 

Peephole narrative

My narrative writing plan

My narrative wirting

One day a boy named Jaytee was bored. He then went down to the park
with his bat and balls. When he got there he was playing for about 10
minutes until he whacked the ball so far he whacked over the cage and
into the bush. Then he went looking in the bush for his ball and then he
seen a boy. He asked him if he was ok he said yes, Jaytee asked him what
his name was and he said Ben. Jaytee asked if he wanted to play with
him Ben said ok. Then they were playing until Ben hit the ball over the
cage and Jaytee said nice. Jaytee’s mum called him to go home for dinner Jaytee said bye ben said bye jaytee said i will see you tomorrow.

To be continued

This is my week 3 dimc task

This is my week 3 dimc task that me and my dimc group did