My narrative wirting

One day a boy named Jaytee was bored. He then went down to the park
with his bat and balls. When he got there he was playing for about 10
minutes until he whacked the ball so far he whacked over the cage and
into the bush. Then he went looking in the bush for his ball and then he
seen a boy. He asked him if he was ok he said yes, Jaytee asked him what
his name was and he said Ben. Jaytee asked if he wanted to play with
him Ben said ok. Then they were playing until Ben hit the ball over the
cage and Jaytee said nice. Jaytee’s mum called him to go home for dinner Jaytee said bye ben said bye jaytee said i will see you tomorrow.

To be continued