My narrative peephole wirting

One morning someone knocked on Ben’s door Ben was sitting down he got up and was walking up to the door and he looked thru the peephole and there was a famous man there. Ben opened the door and it was just a photo and the man with the photo was Loto and a couple of years ago ben and Loto had a fight and ben didn't like him anymore. But he was just coming to say sorry for everything he done when he finished saying sorry Ben said sorry for everything he done and I forgive you and then Loto said I forgive you to.




This morning I pear edited with Lorenzo and I changed a couple of word's